1. The author's main thesis is mainly poking fun at imperfections, faults, and wrongs.
2. "having turned my thoughts for many years upon this important subject, and maturely weighed the several schemes of other projectors" "that a young healthy child well nursed is at a year old a most delicious, nourishing, and wholesome food, whether stewed, roasted, baked, or boiled; and I make no doubt that it will equally serve in a fricassee or a ragout. "
3. The reader keys on that this is ironic just a few paragraphs in because its so comical.
4. Everyone is subjected to attack in swifts satire. The Irish are completely Innocent.
5. Swift mostly has the satire as a ironic with very little serious points.
6. The last paragraph is set in a serious tone of voice maybe to show readers that the author isn't insane.
7. In my years i have had one labor job and I completely got along with my boss. He understood that what we were doing was tough physically and cut me some slack.
8.If my job was to process babies i would process them til they were reading for life.
Monday, March 5, 2012
My Narrative
My narrative is ok but it needs more dialog and a bit more organization thorughout the entire piece. Gabe helped work on my grammar and keeping my tenses in the past. What my narrative also needed was to add a couple key points that will keep readers interested in my narrative.
Gabe's Narrative
Gabe had a very good looking narrative. It was well put together and had a couple very interesting point throughout the story. What Gabe needed to work on is to keep his grammar in check while also keeping his tenses the same. Gabe's narrative also had a lot of very good details into what he is feeling, seeing, or hearing while also having great dialog.
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